(Edit: went ahead and edited)
You didn't really summarize the original 5129 from the real wiki and you just kinda made a rough article it's supposed to be SCP-5129 and not Scp 5129.
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-404
I just wanted to slim down the information. No explaining how they forget memories when counting the image, none of that.
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in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-231
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in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-5043
thank you!
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-5043
Hey there! Welcome to the site. Personally I think you did quite well!
A couple of suggestions could be that the paragraph regarding "dado brain explosion" could be moved into the Description portion of the article, since it is in the original article's description and it is another effect of the SCP. Another thing would be the listing of the items in the container. Please try to avoid copy pasting directly from the article. You could for example state "…containing other various small objects." Finally, SCP Explained articles are much more informal so you don't need to have the "three (3)". Just use either "three" or "3".
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-666
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-666
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-5043
So this was my first try. Feel free to tell me how I did because I'm unsure.
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-005-J-EX
the inception is UNREAL!!!!!
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » Additional Context VS Descripttion
I think we could change what is the standard of what is to be written in Additional Context. The word "description" in itself doesn't feel right when including information revealed from experiments or addendums, which may not necessarily be that relevant to the SCP in question.
Basically, I think the description should be limited to the abilities of the SCP and what it itself does anomalously and perhaps what is "obviously" stated up front. Additional Context would be the "twist" or anything that is meant to be inferred from the addendums or any other things attached.
This is also because its really difficult to find anything that fits the current criteria for "Additional Context". Perhaps we could create a new "Additional History" or something like that?
SCP Explained is an unofficial branch of the SCP Foundation website that aims to "explain" or basically summarize information from the main website. This is not a site for "Explained SCPs" which is another type of SCP that is written on the main site.
If you wish to write an Explained SCP on the main site please follow the instructions there. Writing in the sandbox is a pretty good start. (http://www.scpwiki.com/forum/t-292582/a-new-contest or http://www.scpwiki.com/how-to-write-an-scp) If you want to write here, then you probably don't need to vet the article past anybody.
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-3352
Page was changed.
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in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-376
Usually pictures aren't put into these
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████ MY ███████ MAIL!
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I Like it
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in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-5118: The Shapeshifter
This is just a scp not uploaded onto the main site.
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in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP Request
Any SCPs you want explained?
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in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-050
Incident Log 050.1
Researcher: Thank you for cleaning my room SCP-05-
Gun trap activated, killing Researcher
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in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP Series
SCP-200 -> SCP-299 finished!
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